Poems

NephilimDeath
by NephilimDeath · 2 posts
5 years ago in Off Topic
Posted 5 years ago · Author
Beautiful angel with snow-white wings
Came down to us this night
By the blue moon's ligth.
She calling, beckoning and cute winks.
The water parted under her feet,
And she visited night dreams again
Feeling like warm gentle rain
When we admire her beauty moonlit.
And the first sun ray
Will finish this way...

The immortal knight.
In a battle launched recently,
The battle was unequal,
Victory achievement is unreal
When the opponent is "perfect."
And the friendship ties lost
Tired of all fighter.
But he did not lose hope
In the finest end.
Burn in the fire, wounded soul,
And he will rise again
Phoenix-like dragon,
And in this place rhyme will not break,
Having just said a few words,
Heard in fragments of dreams.
Victory won a terrible "king"
What can lie finely, deftly,
And he will disappear quickly only
Your dark-eyed faithful knight.

Knight Cat
At any time of the day or night
He is performing duty, not Nov,
After all, this is the fate of the hero.
And, straining his eyes,
He is looking for signs of enemies ...
After all, he is from the knights-cats.
They are not afraid of laziness attacks
And they are ready to fight with her.
After all, these battles are not new to them,
They will not kneel
Before this army of enemies.
Sharpened Blades
And enter into this difficult battle,
Until it sounds - "Hang up".
But even then there is no time for rest ...
And the knights of desire not to deprive:
Find and protect all the ladies.
But this one chose his own burden -
All my life just devote
Protect the true "My lady".
Posted 5 years ago
Nice trying, but I think you should change your second and third poems and make them more rhymed. Hope you will can make it.

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